Try to make a clear background, details always help reinforce
the believability of the story you are trying to convince others
that your character went through in their past.
Giving your attacks/abilities a 'series', or abilities that
compliments one another is always nice and looks like you didn't
just create something random and toss it in the character's
More will be added weekly.
Your not a god. Don't think just because you have a typewriter,
that you can make this all powerful being that outshines even the
greatest of the canon characters. AKA: Your not going to have an
all powerful immortal being that can destroy Shinigami, Asura. Or
anyone amongst this caliber. It's fun to dream, but please, stay
within the laws of reality, an…